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~Start~The world was under attack by fabled monsters that people believed to be only myth but they realized that they were wrong. Millions were killed throughout the world as every country had gone into a state of calamity. People had gone in hiding in fear for their lives since they couldn?t fight them with normal and conventional weapons have no effects on them so people chose to hide.But then a light came for the people of our world. 10 Children have been called to stand up and fight. 3 of them have already been awakened. They are Gelyan, Neraine and Sisily. Now their quest to save the world and awaken the remaining Children starts.~Gelyan P.O.V~I stirred awake as my mind was recovering from the temporal teleportation. I sat up on my bed and looked around and that sight surprised me. I was in a hospital bed in a room that was pure white. I looked around and saw Neraine and Sisily sleeping in separate beds. I tried to stand up but my body ached with sore muscles.?Nera!?She stirred awake as I called her name. She tried to stand up but she also had sore muscles. I was wearing a hospital gown with no label of the hospital we were in.?Gely, what happened???I don?t know what happened after Tosl had sent us to our timeline.?Nera moved her body around with less strain in her muscles. How long have we been out? I was sure that was the question that lingered in our minds. Me and Sisily had moved our bodies with a little ache but as we moved them, the ache had lessened. We had stood up and examined ourselves a little bit further. I was taller than the last time we had drifted and my hair was a bit longer.I now know the answer on what happened and how did us became like this.?Nera, I know what happened. We were asleep for more than 5 years! When we destroyed the Heart of Time in our escapade, we threw off the time displacement we were accustomed to and it made our timeline an identical copy!?The Hanged Man was speaking in my mind as if they were conversing to the other Tarots.?We are in an underground facility that apparently has more secrets than it shows.??Ah, the smell of death proves that conclusion.??Yes? I feel energy running through the walls.?I looked for my clothes and saw them under the bed that was neatly folded. I took my clothes and changed into them. I was surprised since my clothes were not tight. I felt the eerie feeling of being watched and immediately turned around. It was pure blank white or was it? I touched it and felt cold tiles with the grout painted white.?Death, what happened to our weapons?? ?Can?t you make some??I held out my hand and felt the air around me change as if Hydra was in my hands again. The heavy feel of the wind was very natural and familiar to the touch. An orb began to form in front of me. I began to imagine the perfect gun for me. A custom gun that could use light as bullets was forming in my mind. Then the orb took form of the one I imagined.It was a pair of Revolvers that were made of pure silver. The handle was made of lacquered Oak and the barrel was lined with vine engravings. The bullets formed immediately as I imagined them. They were very light and were very durable. The momentum of the guns as I moved them to and fro was very quick and that allowed me to battle quickly. ~Neraine P.O.V~I was surprised at the new weapon that Gely created. I held out my hands and an orb formed in front of me as well but it was blue surrounded with white mist. I imagined a pair of swords that were very fluid in movement as I moved even faster. The blade would be so strong that the wind would follow every slash I took.The orb began to take shape and they became sword handles that were decorated with an array of reflection. I took them in my hands and they felt as if the eerie winter wind were calling. The handles were light and then blades made of cold wind condensed into the handle and they looked very sharp with every slash I took. The blades dispelled and I formed a long bow by placing the handles in a different position. They were pretty cool, literally. They were each decorated by an opening rose among rose buds. They were perfect for me to make different movements that would save my life. The wall looked strong and to test them out, so I slashed the twin blades in an X shape and the wall broke down.~Sisily P.O.V~I AM NOT GOING TO BE WEAPONLESS!!!! I held out my hand and an orb of red and yellow formed. My imagination went rampant and it took shape as gigantic strawberry lollipop and a star seemed to shine inside the red colored lollipop. It dropped and the whole room trembled as it dropped. I lifted it up with one hand and it felt so light.?SISI! How can you lift that!???Maybe because of the Warpblade being so heavy that I had to teleport it with me to attack but when I did Flame Tornado, I had to lift it high so I?m sure that I was getting stronger the more I used it.?I licked the lollipop and it was so sweet that it made my teeth hurt. After we all changed into our clothes, we went through the hole Nera made. It was a cavern made by weathering of the rocks because of the water. My mind went on and on as the scenarios of what happened while we were out played in my mind.*List of Scenarios that Might Happen*#everything above ground was dead so people hid under the earth.#the other worlds leaked in this world and people began to live a post-apocalyptic lifestyle.#the people of earth was annihilated by aliens and took the remaining people alive as slaves.#the apocalypse prematurely started and killed everything.#the sun wiped out everything in the whole planet and killed everything by bathing it in a solar wind.After a while, we reached a cave in and I simply smashed my lollipop into the rocks and they blasted as far as we could see into the cloudy skyline. When we got out, we were shocked and angry at the same time. We were in New York and it was already weathered down into a panic leveled place. We wandered around the weathered streets with weapons in hand.Then we heard a familiar snarl that we could tell from anywhere. An Aquolf pack had arrived at the back with 20 wolves readying to fight. We all jumped in to the fray and I simply whacked any of them that I got close to. Nera slashed 2 wolves in one go while Gely shot some down. I was getting annoyed that I slammed the lollipop down on the ground hard and a large wave thunder roasted the rest.?Shocking??I jokingly punched him in the arm and he winced in pain. I rolled up his sleeve and saw a bruise from my punch. Wow, I?m getting crazy strong. I placed a hand on the forming bruise and it shined bright red. I pulled it off and the bump was gone. He flashed a smile to my direction and I sent a glare back. He sweat dropped and looked away.We continued walking down the road with our guard up. Gely stopped and we readied to fight again. There was a large group of human bandits ganging on us.?Leave the girls boy if you want to live.??Not happening Leather face!?Gely shot him down while Nera began to whip the bandits with snow and I swung my lollipop fast and a wave of fire burned down 10 of them. The bandits looked afraid but stood their ground. Brave but stupid. They were more afraid of what would happen if they didn?t bring us in than us. I slammed my lollipop hard on the ground and wave of lightning swept over them.We continued walking through the carnage and destruction we caused. We felt very tired and cold as we killed humans. I mean sure we killed other things like Aquolves and the Tale Memory but humans are a different story. It felt dark to have killed them for protection but if the need for us to sacrifice one of us arises, we will offer Gely. Him we can live without.I fell asleep quickly as we rested in an abandoned building. Strangely I slept without Drifting after knowing about lucid dreaming. I woke up in the dark of night with Gelyan looking out of the window. I stood up and took a place next to him. He smiled and I leaned on him. He rested his head on mine and it felt warm. It was the first time I felt him give a sincere gesture.?Go to sleep Sisi???Nooooooo? If I did, you might double-cross us again and hightail into another timeline!?*Chuckles*?Fine, I?ll sleep.?We both walked towards a pillar and I fell asleep in his embrace.~Neraine P.O.V~I woke up with the gentle beams of the sun, raining down on my face. I was surprised of what I saw. Sisi was sleeping in Gely's arms. I chose not to wake them so I began to tiptoe my way to them. Once I was near him, I lied down on Gely's side and felt so? warm? something I haven?t felt for a long time. I was so busy with pushing people away so that I wouldn?t get hurt prevented me of one thing, a family.~Gelyan P.O.V~I woke up with both Sisi and Nera leaning on me with peaceful looks of sleep. I sighed contently as the sun rained down with beautiful sparkles of light floating off into the air. This was the closest I had to a family compared to my real one? I felt so happy as if my heart began to be light as the weights I placed are being lifted? I won?t let anyone break my family.~Sisily P.O.V~I stirred awake as the sunbeams lit up the bleak world. I looked up and saw Gely hugging me and Nera while we both embrace him. I felt happy with them. We were the Trio of Genesis and we stuck together through thick and thin ?till the bitter end. I never felt lonely with them and they felt like they were my second family. I don?t want to feel without them.~Gelyan P.O.V~We all stirred awake in unison as the gentle pitter patter of rain had draped over the normal quiet background. We were getting soaked as the rain progressed. We all stood up and stretched our arms and legs. Then I felt something in my pocket. It was the present I made for Sisi and Nera while we were on Zodiac Island.?Uhm, Nera and Sisi, I made something for you guys? Here, I hope you like it.?I said as I held out 2 pairs of earrings that were made out of Rainbow Stones and Shapely Gems. Nera and Sisi blushed as well as me. ?T-t-t-thanks Gely???I-i-i-I love it??Then a honey bear appeared from behind us with an ?Aww? look. I went toward him and patted his head. He looked very happy as the fur on his neck became matted by the bee hive on his back. The hive began to secrete honey like the one that we got for the girl from Emi?s world. I missed Emi and how we had seen new horizons with her.Then a mirror appeared and Emi flew out. Sisi rushed to her and immediately hugged her.?Emi, how did you get here!???Well Neraine, you make it sound as if you don?t want me here. But fine I?ll answer the question. Esis sent me here to help you because of the temporal anomalies that are present thus causing the timelines to leak to one another.??AHHH! EMI, MY BRAIN IS HURTING! USE MORE COMMON WORDS!?Sisi shouted as she clutched her head. Emi sighed as she tried to simplify her statement. I stepped in faster than her.?She?s saying that she was sent by Esis to help us fix the problems with the timelines we found here.??Oh? OKAY!?Sisi whistled and Niddhogg came to us. I stood by the edge of the building window and jumped. I dog whistled and Behemoth rose up from the ground, catching me. The ground rumbled as Nera called Beelzebub in the sky, his swarm rising from the ground. Behemoth had flown high in the sky as my fingers filled with chaotic energy.?Let?s start by training. I haven?t flown with Behemoth for 4 years.??Yeah, so did Tinkfy? I guess we should practice a little bit before actually taking to the skies.?Sisi?s mace began to shift into a red gun with the star connected to the gun where the barrel should be. She shot the remains of the building and red goo seemed to fly. The goo stuck to the building and it exploded. Emi, who can fly, simply floated near us. I noticed that she had grown her hair longer and her light skin tone seemed to shine. She seemed too had replaced her robes with a white and yellow dress.Her hair didn?t flap but it seemed as if the wind carried her naturally. She had worn a topaz necklace under her hair that the topaz was only visible.?Hey Emi, how come your not flying using your hair???Actually I can now call upon the wind to carry me so that I can use magic and use my hair to attack.?After what seemed like 2 hours, we were able to get the feel of flight once again and we had flown to the closest place we would look, Sisi?s home. Sisi had dived down and landed near a shady alley. She hopped off of Niddhogg and she entered the alley. We all followed her with our Spirit Beasts flew high in the sky.~Sisily P.O.V~We had arrived near my home and since Tinkfy couldn?t move here so we landed near my home. I felt scared for the first time in my life because I have been lucid dreaming for about 5 years but the last time was about 5 years. I feel that they were afraid of the fact that I became Comatose with Nera and Gely so they placed us in the same hospital.I lead them to a Chinese restaurant that hasn?t lost the shine I remember. I entered the giant doors, decorated by red paint and golden dragons. People wearing tattered rags looked to us as if they haven?t seen any people outside the room. Tinkfy, Beelzebub and Behemoth landed near the entrance and people began to panic.?Tinkfy! Bad boy! Don?t land there without being careful!?Tinkfy became saddened as I scolded him. People began to shout.?AHH, MONSTER! GET AWAY FROM IT GIRL!?A man began to shove me away.?WHAT ARE YOU DOING!???SAVING YOUR LIFE! NOW MOVE!?I pushed him with one hand and I sent him flying. The man had made a crash and went through the wall, into the store room. From the other side of the room, I heard someone shout my name.?Sisily!???Dad, is that you??I ran through the scared people and made my way to the other side of the room to my dad. I hugged him tightly. I saw my elder sister run towards me and she hugged me tightly. Her eyes filled with sorrow as she cried her eyes on me. I had let go of dad and dragged them to meet Nera and Gely. Gely and Nera sheepishly smiled.?Ahh, who are they Sisi? Are they your friends???Yeah sis, who is that handsome guy and that beautiful girl???They?re my friends, Gelyan and Neraine. Oh and these are our pets, Tinkfy, Beelzebub and Behemoth. Oh and the young woman is Emi.?They were awestruck as they saw Tinkfy.?Sisi, I don?t know where you?ve been but you?ve grown into a beautiful young woman.??Wait, you didn?t send me with them???No? the hospital said that they needed to move you into a special facility to help you. We protested but they did it anyway???That?s okay.?I was truly afraid in who placed us in the same facility. We looked at each other and I planned to reveal our secret. I sighed deeply and I turned to face my father and sister.?Dad, Sis, I have a secret to tell you. I have already known Gelyan and Neraine for a long time now. Even before I was in comatose??I began to tell them every adventure we had and every friend we made. After I finished, he looked at me with anger in his eyes. My sister had sadness in hers and she looked at us in disgust.?You have been risking your life while we were worried sick about you! Did you think that that?s okay with us!???Dad? Just don?t???You ask me to allow my daughter, your sister, to waste her life!???DAD! I?M NOT ASKING YOU! I?M ONLY TELLING YOU WHY I WAS COMATOSE! I HAVE MADE MY DECISION WETHER YOU AGREE OR NOT! IF YOU DON?T AGREE ABOUT IT THEN DON?T! ME AND MY FRIENDS ARE THE ONLY ONES WHO CAN SAVE THE WORLD SO WE?RE GOING TO!?I screamed at the top of my lungs out of frustration. I turned around and walked out the door. I may have been his daughter but I?m stronger now.?I?m sorry sir??Nera bowed and followed after me. Gelyan followed afterwards. We mounted on our Spirit Beasts and we flew off. We reached London by afternoon and we went to Gely's house.~Gelyan P.O.V~We reached my neighborhood and found Aquolves littered all over the streets. My revolvers simply shot fast with no need of reloads. The bullets pierced through the Aquolf flesh. The rapid fire was very useful against them so I simply moved in a side run movement that allowed me to spray the mob with bullets and it easily pierced their defenses.Nera had danced around the Aquolves, cutting down the mob by 30 while Sisi had mauled the mob and smashed her lollipop to the nearest Aquolf, sending it crashing to a group of them. After a while, the mob was killed and a teen was hiding behind the house that was weathered down. Sisi smashed her lollipop to the ground and a weak pillar of lightning struck the house.?PLEASE DON?T HURT ME!??We?ll only hurt you if don?t come out!?He walked out of the house with his hands over his head. He had blue hair that seemed to shine with the sun. His emerald eyes were hidden under a baseball cap and he was wearing a tattered blue shirt under a black tattered robe. He carried his self with amazing grace as if the ground was two feet high. Then realization hit me.?Andreas, is that you???Who are you and how do you know my name???I summon the High Priestess!?Nera shouted as the High Priestess came down, wearing a pure white priestess dress and holding a black spear in her hands. Andreas was awestruck by Nera?s tarot. She glided down the sky and gently landed next to Nera. Sisi had her hands held up high and began to mutter a spell.?I summon the Lovers!?The Lovers descended to the ground, they were two forms, the man and woman wearing cloth robes with the apple in their hands. They gracefully landed with a near silent thud and held their hands to the side and they made a mage circle of fire and lightning. Andreas began to stumble back in fear as to what would happen to him.?I summon the Hanged Man!?The hanged man rose from the ground but carrying his cross on his back. He was chained to the cross but he used gravity to float and the wind began to form snowflakes that floated still near him. Andreas began to make a run for it but the Hanged Man pulled him back. The High Priestess? spear shined brightly and it turned into a staff.She touched Andreas? forehead and she made a magic circle in front of him. She muttered solemnly with the Lovers and a pillar of light washed over him. When it quelled, the magic slowly dissipated into the air. The Hanged Man reduced the gravitational pull and had set Andreas on the ground. They disappeared and that left them with Andreas.?Andreas, are you okay???Gelyan, what happened???You lost your memory so we had to restore it.??Did I? Well no matter, who are these beautiful girls???These are my friends Neraine and Sisily. Hey, did you see my dad???He?s in the Boarding House with the other survivors.??Hop on! We?ll give you a ride there and because I don?t know which Boarding House here???Really!? Are you sure it?s safe to ride him???I?ve ridden him while firing poison bullets and dodged monsters in the sky, I?m sure it?s not safe to ride him.??That?s not assuring???Oh just do it before Neraine uses her arrows to bore holes in your body before you could even say what I said.?*Nera flashes her bow*Andreas sweat dropped and immediately climbed on Behemoth. I smiled at him and he glared back. I motioned for him to stand up but he refuses so I just shrugged and made Behemoth fly as fast as he could go. He held on the horns and Behemoth flew even faster causing him to tumble to the end of the tail.?How do you not fall off even at this speed!???I don?t know, experience??I spotted the Boarding School up ahead and prepared for the descent. After a gentle landing, we walked up the gate and Sisi rammed her lollipop to the gate and it easily collapsed. People began crowd at the collapsed gate with makeshift weapons. My father was heading the crowd of so called defenders. He looked at me with anger and disgust.?Everyone! Do not be fooled by the monster?s appearances! They?re only disguises are made so that they could gain entry for no human can do that!?They charged at us with full force. We sighed and incapacitated them all except my father. He spat at us and Nera looked pissed but I stopped her before she killed him. I went over to him and began to mutter something in a hushed tone. I held out my palm and a pillar of green light formed around him, consuming his body.Nera and Sisi looked with worry with what I did. I just shrugged and hopped on Behemoth with Emi just arriving.?WHY DID YOU LEAVE ME ALONE IN NEW YORK!? I MEAN, WOULD IT KILL YOU TO FLY AT THE SAME SPEED AS ME BECAUSE THE WIND IS A LOT SLOWER THAN YOUR SPIRIT BEASTS!???Sorry Emi, I just needed to see my dad but now I see no reason to stay here???Hey Gelyan, I?m coming with you!??You can?t, you?re not a Drifter.??Yes I am!?He held his hands forward and formed a pair of Diamond Shields and he comfortably sat on Niddhogg and they began to fly to the east with Emi riding with me. Night fell and we rested in Italy that was almost deserted. We went to a pizza parlor where there was still the chef making pizza. He looked happy as he placed the finished pizza in the oven.?Hello and welcome to Francesco?s Pizzeria, what would you like???We?d like a tri-?A large bang could be heard from outside. Everyone but Andre sighed and went out. Andre followed out after us. There was a mob of Aquolves and the Tale Memory appeared. Everyone jumped in and began to attack head on. The tale memory looked tired already and one more hit from Sisi knocked him to death.The Aquolves had died from the misfired shots and everyone calmed down. The chef looked from the parlor and he opened the door. He called someone from upstairs and a girl with long blue hair and a boy with silver hair came down.?Everyone, thank you for coming here and saving us, as our token of appreciation have as much pizza as you want.?~Sisily P.O.V~OH MY GOODNESS? FREE PIZZAS TO THE MAX!!! I WILL TAKE AS MUCH AS POSSIBLE TO GO! I LOVE THE ABILITY TO REHEAT THEM!!!~Gelyan P.O.V~WOW!!! Free pizzas? that seems so wrong. I feel a loophole coming. ~Nera P.O.V~I feel I?m going to be so full after tonight onwards? I fear Sisi?s going to have a pizza party while we fly around the world?~Gelyan P.O.V~The oven was in full blaze as perfectly cooked pizza exited the other side. The boy with silver hair began to spin the dough and it was paper thin, literally paper thin. The girl began to cook a heavenly scented pizza sauce and had placed the sauce thinly on the paper thin dough. Then he placed olives, onions, garlic, salami and cheese. He wrapped it up and covered it a few times.He placed it into the oven with a several others. After a few seconds, every pizza was finished and they placed it into a large sealed bag. We said our thanks and we left for China. We landed there a short couple of hours and we finally had enough time to have a complete rest. We stopped at a nice mansion that was English styled and had a Chinese styled garden.Sisily shrugged and went inside. The inside was amazingly large and the mansion was kept in extremely well conditions. The velvet carpet was still maintained at very high quality as if the carpet wasn?t even used. Then we heard a couple of voices inside a large bedroom. We all walked to the door and entered the room.A boy with blue hair wearing a butler suit was kneeling beside a girl with blonde hair on the bed. We looked over to them and we were shocked to see her condition, excluding Andre. She was Lucid Dreaming. Me, Nera and Sisi held hands and I touched her head. We dived into her dream and we saw her battling a horde of? Slimes? I face palmed myself and we jumped in.Sisi slammed her lollipop to the ground and roasted the slimes. She looked surprised and we exchanged pleasantries.?So Nagi, how long have you been stuck here???About a year ago???Ahh, thank goodness but we should wake up.??Wait! THIS IS A DREAM!??!???Pretty much?I held out a hand and she took it. We woke up to the sound of Andre shaking us vigorously. We looked to the bed and saw Nagi waking up. The boy was crying by her bed. We rushed to her side but she moved. She was stuck in a half stretch.?Well, we tried to warn you.??Yeah, Thanks so much! Now please help me into moving.??Oh, no problem!?Sisi placed a hand on her head and it glowed red. Her body began to form fluid motions and she slapped the boy?s face.?Hayate! You?re soaking the sheet! I missed you so much!??I missed you too, mistress!?They hugged and everyone but Andre awed. We slammed our hands to Andre?s head and he toppled over. We then exchanged our pleasantries and we debriefed her on the situation at hand. We held our heads low and waited for a shout. She chuckled and whispered something in Hayate?s ear and he looked shocked.?So how did you get here in China???We flew from New York and traveled here. Tinkfy, HERE BOY!!!!?A piercing roar erupted from the city and Niddhogg and the others were racing towards us. Nagi ran to the window with so much happiness and dragged Hayate by the neck. Sisi waved at them with Emi on Behemoth. Nagi and Hayate?s mouths hanged as the sight of them grew nearer and nearer.?They can fly!???Yeah! Now which one do you want to ride with???The red dragon!??Careful, he?s a fast flyer? you might want to stand as well??Then an older butler and a maid had burst into the room and were armed with improvised yet deadly looking weapons.?Mistress, you?re awake!?The old butler had thrown himself to Nagi but she sidestepped and dropkicked his back. We heard an unsettling crack but he merely shrugged it off.?Well, that?s Claus for you? So who are you people and what was all that hullaballoo we heard??The maid with caramel brown hair like Sisi?s calmly questioned.?I?m Gelyan and these are my friends Neraine, Sisily and Andreas. Now will you tell us who you are???My name is Maria and that there is Claus??Oh Maria, were going out.??Then we?ll come with you! You have been asleep for a year! The least we could do is to come with you.??Sure! I?ll call Esis for a Spirit Beast to pick you guys up?*produces floating blue crystal* Esis, this is Emi. We need a spirit beast for the latest drifter.??*appears in the shower singing with her back turned* La~la~ *Maria and the other girls covered the boys? eyes (More like tackle and blindfolded) as Esis turns around* EMI! WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU CALLING ME AT THIS TIME!!!???Sorry Esis, I didn?t know you were in the shower???Wait a minute??Esis?s voice began to fade and we struggled to break free from the ice rope Nera made. A cold chill ran down my back as if death was behind me. Then I realized that Nera had death summoned. I stopped squirming and quickly elbowed the others to stop. I heard Death chuckle and I continued to freeze. Then Esis?s voice returned.?Okay, what do you need???Well I was wondering if you could send Leviathan here for the 5th Child. Were really running out of space???Fine but don?t call me whenever you like, okay???Yes Esis??Esis?s voice faded and I felt the rope beginning to loosen. I quickly stood up and undid the blindfold. And there I was, staring Death in the face. She had sunken eyes but contrasting light cream skin. She had a Victorian gown and her matching sunhat. She had a thin frame but in battle, she is very durable. She carried her scythe that was very delicate looking.?I?m sorry!!!!!!?I bowed and she dissipated. I stood up and looked to see Leviathan from the hori
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QUOTE (AsterBlade @ Dec 16 2013, 09:37 AM) quoteccoloro:#000000/coloroKonichiwa Minna-san, This is my first post here and criticism is always accepted but not hater comments.This is a spin-off of Ge.Ne.Sis with a tougher group of characters that will be involved with a bit of romance. Gelyan, Neraine, Sisily, Emi, The re imagination of the Myth Beasts,Esis, Hayate, Nagi, Claus and Maria but everything else is mine.~Start~The world was under attack by fabled monsters that people believed to be only myth but they realized that they were wrong. Millions were killed throughout the world as every country had gone into a state of calamity. People had gone in hiding in fear for their lives since they couldn?t fight them with normal and conventional weapons have no effects on them so people chose to hide.But then a light came for the people of our world. 10 Children have been called to stand up and fight. 3 of them have already been awakened. They are Gelyan, Neraine and Sisily. Now their quest to save the world and awaken the remaining Children starts.~Gelyan P.O.V~I stirred awake as my mind was recovering from the temporal teleportation. I sat up on my bed and looked around and that sight surprised me. I was in a hospital bed in a room that was pure white. I looked around and saw Neraine and Sisily sleeping in separate beds. I tried to stand up but my body ached with sore muscles.?Nera!?She stirred awake as I called her name. She tried to stand up but she also had sore muscles. I was wearing a hospital gown with no label of the hospital we were in.?Gely, what happened???I don?t know what happened after Tosl had sent us to our timeline.?Nera moved her body around with less strain in her muscles. How long have we been out? I was sure that was the question that lingered in our minds. Me and Sisily had moved our bodies with a little ache but as we moved them, the ache had lessened. We had stood up and examined ourselves a little bit further. I was taller than the last time we had drifted and my hair was a bit longer.I now know the answer on what happened and how did us became like this.?Nera, I know what happened. We were asleep for more than 5 years! When we destroyed the Heart of Time in our escapade, we threw off the time displacement we were accustomed to and it made our timeline an identical copy!?The Hanged Man was speaking in my mind as if they were conversing to the other Tarots.?We are in an underground facility that apparently has more secrets than it shows.??Ah, the smell of death proves that conclusion.??Yes? I feel energy running through the walls.?I looked for my clothes and saw them under the bed that was neatly folded. I took my clothes and changed into them. I was surprised since my clothes were not tight. I felt the eerie feeling of being watched and immediately turned around. It was pure blank white or was it? I touched it and felt cold tiles with the grout painted white.?Death, what happened to our weapons?? ?Can?t you make some??I held out my hand and felt the air around me change as if Hydra was in my hands again. The heavy feel of the wind was very natural and familiar to the touch. An orb began to form in front of me. I began to imagine the perfect gun for me. A custom gun that could use light as bullets was forming in my mind. Then the orb took form of the one I imagined.It was a pair of Revolvers that were made of pure silver. The handle was made of lacquered Oak and the barrel was lined with vine engravings. The bullets formed immediately as I imagined them. They were very light and were very durable. The momentum of the guns as I moved them to and fro was very quick and that allowed me to battle quickly. ~Neraine P.O.V~I was surprised at the new weapon that Gely created. I held out my hands and an orb formed in front of me as well but it was blue surrounded with white mist. I imagined a pair of swords that were very fluid in movement as I moved even faster. The blade would be so strong that the wind would follow every slash I took.The orb began to take shape and they became sword handles that were decorated with an array of reflection. I took them in my hands and they felt as if the eerie winter wind were calling. The handles were light and then blades made of cold wind condensed into the handle and they looked very sharp with every slash I took. The blades dispelled and I formed a long bow by placing the handles in a different position. They were pretty cool, literally. They were each decorated by an opening rose among rose buds. They were perfect for me to make different movements that would save my life. The wall looked strong and to test them out, so I slashed the twin blades in an X shape and the wall broke down.~Sisily P.O.V~I AM NOT GOING TO BE WEAPONLESS!!!! I held out my hand and an orb of red and yellow formed. My imagination went rampant and it took shape as gigantic strawberry lollipop and a star seemed to shine inside the red colored lollipop. It dropped and the whole room trembled as it dropped. I lifted it up with one hand and it felt so light.?SISI! How can you lift that!???Maybe because of the Warpblade being so heavy that I had to teleport it with me to attack but when I did Flame Tornado, I had to lift it high so I?m sure that I was getting stronger the more I used it.?I licked the lollipop and it was so sweet that it made my teeth hurt. After we all changed into our clothes, we went through the hole Nera made. It was a cavern made by weathering of the rocks because of the water. My mind went on and on as the scenarios of what happened while we were out played in my mind.*List of Scenarios that Might Happen*#everything above ground was dead so people hid under the earth.#the other worlds leaked in this world and people began to live a post-apocalyptic lifestyle.#the people of earth was annihilated by aliens and took the remaining people alive as slaves.#the apocalypse prematurely started and killed everything.#the sun wiped out everything in the whole planet and killed everything by bathing it in acolorc/colorc coloro:#000000/colorosolar panelcolorc/colorccoloro:#000000/coloro.After a while, we reached a cave in and I simply smashed my lollipop into the rocks and they blasted as far as we could see into the cloudy skyline. When we got out, we were shocked and angry at the same time. We were in New York and it was already weathered down into a panic leveled place. We wandered around the weathered streets with weapons in hand.Then we heard a familiar snarl that we could tell from anywhere. An Aquolf pack had arrived at the back with 20 wolves readying to fight. We all jumped in to the fray and I simply whacked any of them that I got close to. Nera slashed 2 wolves in one go while Gely shot some down. I was getting annoyed that I slammed the lollipop down on the ground hard and a large wave thunder roasted the rest.?Shocking??I jokingly punched him in the arm and he winced in pain. I rolled up his sleeve and saw a bruise from my punch. Wow, I?m getting crazy strong. I placed a hand on the forming bruise and it shined bright red. I pulled it off and the bump was gone. He flashed a smile to my direction and I sent a glare back. He sweat dropped and looked away.We continued walking down the road with our guard up. Gely stopped and we readied to fight again. There was a large group of human bandits ganging on us.?Leave the girls boy if you want to live.??Not happening Leather face!?Gely shot him down while Nera began to whip the bandits with snow and I swung my lollipop fast and a wave of fire burned down 10 of them. The bandits looked afraid but stood their ground. Brave but stupid. They were more afraid of what would happen if they didn?t bring us in than us. I slammed my lollipop hard on the ground and wave of lightning swept over them.We continued walking through the carnage and destruction we caused. We felt very tired and cold as we killed humans. I mean sure we killed other things like Aquolves and the Tale Memory but humans are a different story. It felt dark to have killed them for protection but if the need for us to sacrifice one of us arises, we will offer Gely. Him we can live without.I fell asleep quickly as we rested in an abandoned building. Strangely I slept without Drifting after knowing about lucid dreaming. I woke up in the dark of night with Gelyan looking out of the window. I stood up and took a place next to him. He smiled and I leaned on him. He rested his head on mine and it felt warm. It was the first time I felt him give a sincere gesture.?Go to sleep Sisi???Nooooooo? If I did, you might double-cross us again and hightail into another timeline!?*Chuckles*?Fine, I?ll sleep.?We both walked towards a pillar and I fell asleep in his embrace.~Neraine P.O.V~I woke up with the gentle beams of the sun, raining down on my face. I was surprised of what I saw. Sisi was sleeping in Gely's arms. I chose not to wake them so I began to tiptoe my way to them. Once I was near him, I lied down on Gely's side and felt so? warm? something I haven?t felt for a long time. I was so busy with pushing people away so that I wouldn?t get hurt prevented me of one thing, a family.~Gelyan P.O.V~I woke up with both Sisi and Nera leaning on me with peaceful looks of sleep. I sighed contently as the sun rained down with beautiful sparkles of light floating off into the air. This was the closest I had to a family compared to my real one? I felt so happy as if my heart began to be light as the weights I placed are being lifted? I won?t let anyone break my family.~Sisily P.O.V~I stirred awake as the sunbeams lit up the bleak world. I looked up and saw Gely hugging me and Nera while we both embrace him. I felt happy with them. We were the Trio of Genesis and we stuck together through thick and thin ?till the bitter end. I never felt lonely with them and they felt like they were my second family. I don?t want to feel without them.~Gelyan P.O.V~We all stirred awake in unison as the gentle pitter patter of rain had draped over the normal quiet background. We were getting soaked as the rain progressed. We all stood up and stretched our arms and legs. Then I felt something in my pocket. It was the present I made for Sisi and Nera while we were on Zodiac Island.?Uhm, Nera and Sisi, I made something for you guys? Here, I hope you like it.?I said as I held out 2 pairs of earrings that were made out of Rainbow Stones and Shapely Gems. Nera and Sisi blushed as well as me. ?T-t-t-thanks Gely???I-i-i-I love it??Then a honey bear appeared from behind us with an ?Aww? look. I went toward him and patted his head. He looked very happy as the fur on his neck became matted by the bee hive on his back. The hive began to secrete honey like the one that we got for the girl from Emi?s world. I missed Emi and how we had seen new horizons with her.Then a mirror appeared and Emi flew out. Sisi rushed to her and immediately hugged her.?Emi, how did you get here!???Well Neraine, you make it sound as if you don?t want me here. But fine I?ll answer the question. Esis sent me here to help you because of the temporal anomalies that are present thus causing the timelines to leak to one another.??AHHH! EMI, MY BRAIN IS HURTING! USE MORE COMMON WORDS!?Sisi shouted as she clutched her head. Emi sighed as she tried to simplify her statement. I stepped in faster than her.?She?s saying that she was sent by Esis to help us fix the problems with the timelines we found here.??Oh? OKAY!?Sisi whistled and Niddhogg came to us. I stood by the edge of the building window and jumped. I dog whistled and Behemoth rose up from the ground, catching me. The ground rumbled as Nera called Beelzebub in the sky, his swarm rising from the ground. Behemoth had flown high in the sky as my fingers filled with chaotic energy.?Let?s start by training. I haven?t flown with Behemoth for 4 years.??Yeah, so did Tinkfy? I guess we should practice a little bit before actually taking to the skies.?Sisi?s mace began to shift into a red gun with the star connected to the gun where the barrel should be. She shot the remains of the building and red goo seemed to fly. The goo stuck to the building and it exploded. Emi, who can fly, simply floated near us. I noticed that she had grown her hair longer and her light skin tone seemed to shine. She seemed too had replaced her robes with a white and yellow dress.Her hair didn?t flap but it seemed as if the wind carried her naturally. She had worn a topaz necklace under her hair that the topaz was only visible.?Hey Emi, how come your not flying using your hair???Actually I can now call upon the wind to carry me so that I can use magic and use my hair to attack.?After what seemed like 2 hours, we were able to get the feel of flight once again and we had flown to the closest place we would look, Sisi?s home. Sisi had dived down and landed near a shady alley. She hopped off of Niddhogg and she entered the alley. We all followed her with our Spirit Beasts flew high in the sky.~Sisily P.O.V~We had arrived near my home and since Tinkfy couldn?t move here so we landed near my home. I felt scared for the first time in my life because I have been lucid dreaming for about 5 years but the last time was about 5 years. I feel that they were afraid of the fact that I became Comatose with Nera and Gely so they placed us in the same hospital.I lead them to a Chinese restaurant that hasn?t lost the shine I remember. I entered the giant doors, decorated by red paint and golden dragons. People wearing tattered rags looked to us as if they haven?t seen any people outside the room. Tinkfy, Beelzebub and Behemoth landed near the entrance and people began to panic.?Tinkfy! Bad boy! Don?t land there without being careful!?Tinkfy became saddened as I scolded him. People began to shout.?AHH, MONSTER! GET AWAY FROM IT GIRL!?A man began to shove me away.?WHAT ARE YOU DOING!???SAVING YOUR LIFE! NOW MOVE!?I pushed him with one hand and I sent him flying. The man had made a crash and went through the wall, into the store room. From the other side of the room, I heard someone shout my name.?Sisily!???Dad, is that you??I ran through the scared people and made my way to the other side of the room to my dad. I hugged him tightly. I saw my elder sister run towards me and she hugged me tightly. Her eyes filled with sorrow as she cried her eyes on me. I had let go of dad and dragged them to meet Nera and Gely. Gely and Nera sheepishly smiled.?Ahh, who are they Sisi? Are they your friends???Yeah sis, who is that handsome guy and that beautiful girl???They?re my friends, Gelyan and Neraine. Oh and these are our pets, Tinkfy, Beelzebub and Behemoth. Oh and the young woman is Emi.?They were awestruck as they saw Tinkfy.?Sisi, I don?t know where you?ve been but you?ve grown into a beautiful young woman.??Wait, you didn?t send me with them???No? the hospital said that they needed to move you into a special facility to help you. We protested but they did it anyway???That?s okay.?I was truly afraid in who placed us in the same facility. We looked at each other and I planned to reveal our secret. I sighed deeply and I turned to face my father and sister.?Dad, Sis, I have a secret to tell you. I have already known Gelyan and Neraine for a long time now. Even before I was in comatose??I began to tell them every adventure we had and every friend we made. After I finished, he looked at me with anger in his eyes. My sister had sadness in hers and she looked at us in disgust.?You have been risking your life while we were worried sick about you! Did you think that that?s okay with us!???Dad? Just don?t???You ask me to allow my daughter, your sister, to waste her life!???DAD! I?M NOT ASKING YOU! I?M ONLY TELLING YOU WHY I WAS COMATOSE! I HAVE MADE MY DECISION WETHER YOU AGREE OR NOT! IF YOU DON?T AGREE ABOUT IT THEN DON?T! ME AND MY FRIENDS ARE THE ONLY ONES WHO CAN SAVE THE WORLD SO WE?RE GOING TO!?I screamed at the top of my lungs out of frustration. I turned around and walked out the door. I may have been his daughter but I?m stronger now.?I?m sorry sir??Nera bowed and followed after me. Gelyan followed afterwards. We mounted on our Spirit Beasts and we flew off. We reached London by afternoon and we went to Gely's house.~Gelyan P.O.V~We reached my neighborhood and found Aquolves littered all over the streets. My revolvers simply shot fast with no need of reloads. The bullets pierced through the Aquolf flesh. The rapid fire was very useful against them so I simply moved in a side run movement that allowed me to spray the mob with bullets and it easily pierced their defenses.Nera had danced around the Aquolves, cutting down the mob by 30 while Sisi had mauled the mob and smashed her lollipop to the nearest Aquolf, sending it crashing to a group of them. After a while, the mob was killed and a teen was hiding behind the house that was weathered down. Sisi smashed her lollipop to the ground and a weak pillar of lightning struck the house.?PLEASE DON?T HURT ME!??We?ll only hurt you if don?t come out!?He walked out of the house with his hands over his head. He had blue hair that seemed to shine with the sun. His emerald eyes were hidden under a baseball cap and he was wearing a tattered blue shirt under a black tattered robe. He carried his self with amazing grace as if the ground was two feet high. Then realization hit me.?Andreas, is that you???Who are you and how do you know my name???I summon the High Priestess!?Nera shouted as the High Priestess came down, wearing a pure white priestess dress and holding a black spear in her hands. Andreas was awestruck by Nera?s tarot. She glided down the sky and gently landed next to Nera. Sisi had her hands held up high and began to mutter a spell.?I summon the Lovers!?The Lovers descended to the ground, they were two forms, the man and woman wearing cloth robes with the apple in their hands. They gracefully landed with a near silent thud and held their hands to the side and they made a mage circle of fire and lightning. Andreas began to stumble back in fear as to what would happen to him.?I summon the Hanged Man!?The hanged man rose from the ground but carrying his cross on his back. He was chained to the cross but he used gravity to float and the wind began to form snowflakes that floated still near him. Andreas began to make a run for it but the Hanged Man pulled him back. The High Priestess? spear shined brightly and it turned into a staff.She touched Andreas? forehead and she made a magic circle in front of him. She muttered solemnly with the Lovers and a pillar of light washed over him. When it quelled, the magic slowly dissipated into the air. The Hanged Man reduced the gravitational pull and had set Andreas on the ground. They disappeared and that left them with Andreas.?Andreas, are you okay???Gelyan, what happened???You lost your memory so we had to restore it.??Did I? Well no matter, who are these beautiful girls???These are my friends Neraine and Sisily. Hey, did you see my dad???He?s in the Boarding House with the other survivors.??Hop on! We?ll give you a ride there and because I don?t know which Boarding House here???Really!? Are you sure it?s safe to ride him???I?ve ridden him while firing poison bullets and dodged monsters in the sky, I?m sure it?s not safe to ride him.??That?s not assuring???Oh just do it before Neraine uses her arrows to bore holes in your body before you could even say what I said.?*Nera flashes her bow*Andreas sweat dropped and immediately climbed on Behemoth. I smiled at him and he glared back. I motioned for him to stand up but he refuses so I just shrugged and made Behemoth fly as fast as he could go. He held on the horns and Behemoth flew even faster causing him to tumble to the end of the tail.?How do you not fall off even at this speed!???I don?t know, experience??I spotted the Boarding School up ahead and prepared for the descent. After a gentle landing, we walked up the gate and Sisi rammed her lollipop to the gate and it easily collapsed. People began crowd at the collapsed gate with makeshift weapons. My father was heading the crowd of so called defenders. He looked at me with anger and disgust.?Everyone! Do not be fooled by the monster?s appearances! They?re only disguises are made so that they could gain entry for no human can do that!?They charged at us with full force. We sighed and incapacitated them all except my father. He spat at us and Nera looked pissed but I stopped her before she killed him. I went over to him and began to mutter something in a hushed tone. I held out my palm and a pillar of green light formed around him, consuming his body.Nera and Sisi looked with worry with what I did. I just shrugged and hopped on Behemoth with Emi just arriving.?WHY DID YOU LEAVE ME ALONE IN NEW YORK!? I MEAN, WOULD IT KILL YOU TO FLY AT THE SAME SPEED AS ME BECAUSE THE WIND IS A LOT SLOWER THAN YOUR SPIRIT BEASTS!???Sorry Emi, I just needed to see my dad but now I see no reason to stay here???Hey Gelyan, I?m coming with you!??You can?t, you?re not a Drifter.??Yes I am!?He held his hands forward and formed a pair of Diamond Shields and he comfortably sat on Niddhogg and they began to fly to the east with Emi riding with me. Night fell and we rested in Italy that was almost deserted. We went to a pizza parlor where there was still the chef making pizza. He looked happy as he placed the finished pizza in the oven.?Hello and welcome to Francesco?s Pizzeria, what would you like???We?d like a tri-?A large bang could be heard from outside. Everyone but Andre sighed and went out. Andre followed out after us. There was a mob of Aquolves and the Tale Memory appeared. Everyone jumped in and began to attack head on. The tale memory looked tired already and one more hit from Sisi knocked him to death.The Aquolves had died from the misfired shots and everyone calmed down. The chef looked from the parlor and he opened the door. He called someone from upstairs and a girl with long blue hair and a boy with silver hair came down.?Everyone, thank you for coming here and saving us, as our token of appreciation have as much pizza as you want.?~Sisily P.O.V~OH MY GOODNESS? FREE PIZZAS TO THE MAX!!! I WILL TAKE AS MUCH AS POSSIBLE TO GO! I LOVE THE ABILITY TO REHEAT THEM!!!~Gelyan P.O.V~WOW!!! Free pizzas? that seems so wrong. I feel a loophole coming. ~Nera P.O.V~I feel I?m going to be so full after tonight onwards? I fear Sisi?s going to have a pizza party while we fly around the world?~Gelyan P.O.V~The oven was in full blaze as perfectly cooked pizza exited the other side. The boy with silver hair began to spin the dough and it was paper thin, literally paper thin. The girl began to cook a heavenly scented pizza sauce and had placed the sauce thinly on the paper thin dough. Then he placed olives, onions, garlic, salami and cheese. He wrapped it up and covered it a few times.He placed it into the oven with a several others. After a few seconds, every pizza was finished and they placed it into a large sealed bag. We said our thanks and we left for China. We landed there a short couple of hours and we finally had enough time to have a complete rest. We stopped at a nice mansion that was English styled and had a Chinese styled garden.Sisily shrugged and went inside. The inside was amazingly large and the mansion was kept in extremely well conditions. The velvet carpet was still maintained at very high quality as if the carpet wasn?t even used. Then we heard a couple of voices inside a large bedroom. We all walked to the door and entered the room.A boy with blue hair wearing a butler suit was kneeling beside a girl with blonde hair on the bed. We looked over to them and we were shocked to see her condition, excluding Andre. She was Lucid Dreaming. Me, Nera and Sisi held hands and I touched her head. We dived into her dream and we saw her battling a horde of? Slimes? I face palmed myself and we jumped in.Sisi slammed her lollipop to the ground and roasted the slimes. She looked surprised and we exchanged pleasantries.?So Nagi, how long have you been stuck here???About a year ago???Ahh, thank goodness but we should wake up.??Wait! THIS IS A DREAM!??!???Pretty much?I held out a hand and she took it. We woke up to the sound of Andre shaking us vigorously. We looked to the bed and saw Nagi waking up. The boy was crying by her bed. We rushed to her side but she moved. She was stuck in a half stretch.?Well, we tried to warn you.??Yeah, Thanks so much! Now please help me into moving.??Oh, no problem!?Sisi placed a hand on her head and it glowed red. Her body began to form fluid motions and she slapped the boy?s face.?Hayate! You?re soaking the sheet! I missed you so much!??I missed you too, mistress!?They hugged and everyone but Andre awed. We slammed our hands to Andre?s head and he toppled over. We then exchanged our pleasantries and we debriefed her on the situation at hand. We held our heads low and waited for a shout. She chuckled and whispered something in Hayate?s ear and he looked shocked.?So how did you get here in China???We flew from New York and traveled here. Tinkfy, HERE BOY!!!!?A piercing roar erupted from the city and Niddhogg and the others were racing towards us. Nagi ran to the window with so much happiness and dragged Hayate by the neck. Sisi waved at them with Emi on Behemoth. Nagi and Hayate?s mouths hanged as the sight of them grew nearer and nearer.?They can fly!???Yeah! Now which one do you want to ride with???The red dragon!??Careful, he?s a fast flyer? you might want to stand as well??Then an older butler and a maid had burst into the room and were armed with improvised yet deadly looking weapons.?Mistress, you?re awake!?The old butler had thrown himself to Nagi but she sidestepped and dropkicked his back. We heard an unsettling crack but he merely shrugged it off.?Well, that?s Claus for you? So who are you people and what was all that hullaballoo we heard??The maid with caramel brown hair like Sisi?s calmly questioned.?I?m Gelyan and these are my friends Neraine, Sisily and Andreas. Now will you tell us who you are???My name is Maria and that there is Claus??Oh Maria, were going out.??Then we?ll come with you! You have been asleep for a year! The least we could do is to come with you.??Sure! I?ll call Esis for a Spirit Beast to pick you guys up?*produces floating blue crystal* Esis, this is Emi. We need a spirit beast for the latest drifter.??*appears in the shower singing with her back turned* La~la~ *Maria and the other girls covered the boys? eyes (More like tackle and blindfolded) as Esis turns around* EMI! WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU CALLING ME AT THIS TIME!!!???Sorry Esis, I didn?t know you were in the shower???Wait a minute??Esis?s voice began to fade and we struggled to break free from the ice rope Nera made. A cold chill ran down my back as if death was behind me. Then I realized that Nera had death summoned. I stopped squirming and quickly elbowed the others to stop. I heard Death chuckle and I continued to freeze. Then Esis?s voice returned.?Okay, what do you need???Well I was wondering if you could send Leviathan here for the 5th Child. Were really running out of space???Fine but don?t call me whenever you like, okay???Yes Esis??Esis?s voice faded and I felt the rope beginning to loosen. I quickly stood up and undid the blindfold. 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QUOTE (JodyWestendorf @ Apr 4 2014, 07:54 AM) quotecPretty exciting long post.. Bit strange no one replied..You have mentioned truly amazing comments..Thanks for sharing it out..QuoteEndQuoteEEndAw thanks! But I really have really bad writer's block. I need some help as to where they go next and someone who can give some more characters and a great final boss. I can give out the details of the character sheets. P.S. the characters don't have to be human. just state where they come from. and their description of the race.Character Sheet 1 EXAMPLEName: NeraineNickname: NeraRace (If not human):Age: 17 (from the original Ge.Ne.Sis +5 years i.e. Neraine was 12 or something)Element: BlueWeapon (If you can't think of any weapon, just give me their fighting style or if you can just both): Coming Winter - skilled attacksAttributes: 140 points only even though the stats I placed are totaled to 160 points Courage (strength): 50/50 Will (Magic): 33/35 Faith (Endurance): 27/45 Wit (Agility): 30/30Specialization (what is their main role in battle): Main damage supplier and tankTarots (at least 1, no more than 3):1. High Priestess: (Description,if none, I'll supply one) (Ability, AKA either soul burst or use in a fight or ability outside battle)2. The Death: (Same things just put in paragraph form)Attitude towards Life (how they treat life in battle): importantField Ability (abilities outside battle. Only one though): Unlocking sealed doorsRole in the Story (Place an attribute that will be the key to saving the world): Angel of Strength - "To face uncertainty and doubt to defend the world requires not only physical strength but also the strength of your resolve"Symbolic Item: Wheel - "No matter how many times you are pushed down, you always find the strength to rise up every single time"Revolution Trigger (anything that will opt them to become stronger and deal extreme effects): To protect someone important.Revolution Ability (Something like a limit break): Prism Act: Grateful Hope - She automatically nullifies any attack to anyone important to her by causing a 100 hit chain counter.Revolution Form (change in her appearance when they enter Revolution): Her normally tied hair became undone as they became changing from white to blue and back to purple over and over again. Her Blue dress became a white robe that draped just until below her knees. She had Coming Winter in her hands but formed a constant air of fr
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QUOTE (Pryo Gx @ Apr 29 2014, 05:10 AM) quotecAs much as I'd love to help, I regularly forget to come on here... ^^'It was a pretty good read (plus, giant lollipop... that almost screams Sisi!), something I'd like to suggest is putting the P.O.V. lines in bold so it's a little bit easier to clarify (that, or add a blank line following the end of each P.O.V.) the changes, I'll try and think of other stuff for you as well!QuoteEndQuoteEEndSorry, this story was my first post here in this forum so yeah, I just hit upload and poof.Thanks so much for the suggest! The giant lollipop just came to me in a dream where Sisi was 50 feet tall and rampaging through Tokyo with lasers firing out her eyes and whacking everything with the Lollipop. Nera and Gely, however, they were attacking Texas and Greenland respectively.Nera has developing feelings for Gely but is completely tsundere while Sisi will however be able to knock some sense into Gely but that's later. I plan to add a giant plot twist in their lives. The true villain is not Reciful. So don't expect that. Gen and Esis will appear as Protagonists. Yes. Gen. He won't try to destroy this timeline. Esis will explain later when she appears in the 5th chapter. Reciful is also a Protagonist, who WON'T attempt to destroy the pen and diary. He'll explain in the 4th chapter. Oh yeah, Reciful, Gen and Esis will need Re-imaginations and weapons so please help me there. Please PM them or the characters to me and not post them so it won't ruin the surprise. Just the specs for the weapon (description of the weapon, background of the weapon and main use of the weapon: i.e. main damage, support, skirmish or whatnot.)Any other things that I need to improve, please say it with sizeo:4/sizeoNO HESITATIONsizec/sizec. I also plan to do a small high school type of battle. Think Little Busters (anime) classroom battle with a camera and a toy set. Who knew toy sets where powerful. I also have the 4th and 5th chapters in my head but I can't continue with out 2 and 3. Please give effort to explaining the characters because, they will make or break the story. sizeo:5/sizeoNO SPAMMING OR I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN AND DUEL YOU TO THE DEATH WITH A TEDDY BEAR AND A SOCK MONKEY! /angry.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid=":angry:" border="0" alt="angry.gif" /> sizec/sizecsizeo:5/sizeoGood Luck and Good bye... /cool.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid="B)" border="0" alt="cool.gif" /> sizec/sizec sizeo:4/sizeo*Makes cool Exit through the window* "ARGH! Who placed the porcupine house here!?"sizec/s
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Chapter 2 - An Uncertain HeartFor as long as I can recall, Neraine is the strongest person I have ever met. The day she sheds a tear, is the day we find El Dorado. - Gelyan to Andreas in an unspecified date.Gelyan's P.O.VNagi said she wanted to go back to Japan and see how things were at her home. Since we didn't have a say in it, she also hired Andreas to be a butler in charge of protecting her. Klaus protested but was done in by another drop kick by Nagi. Leviathan carried the remains of the Sanzenin bloodline and asked us to go on without her. Emi said that she needed to go back to the Zero-Degree Fields or Shackpot would have a fit. She gave us a Contact Crystal like the one she used to contact Esis."So what do you guys want to do?"Sisily asked out of boredom. Neraine deadpanned and I just let out a small chuckle."You up for a treasure hunt?""Well, it's better than sitting and staring out of boredom."Neraine muttered. I smiled a bit before thinking of the perfect hunt. Then it hit me."The Temple of the Moon Goddess!""Where the heck did you get that idea?""From one of the books in the library. Anyways, I always noticed something strange about Nera-""Really? It had to be me?""As I was saying, Nera's Moon Waltz has a faint almost divine presence. So I thought I'd do a little researching and found out that the Moon Waltz is a descendant of a ritual performed at the Temple of the Moon Goddess. It is when Chang'e is finally greeted by her husband, Hou Yi. Her smile illuminates the cold moon and brings blessings to the land as she does. Once it is done, Chang'e can finally rest until the next year."Sisi looked a bit sad but sat down patiently."Since Hou Yi died, Chang'e would grieve as Hou Yi's soul passed on. The Head Priestess thought of the Moon Call Ritual and made it so that they could call Hou Yi's soul and have it meet up with Chang'e. Since then, the blessing continued but one day, an evil monster sealed him away in a wooden box with a paper tag on it. Don't ask me how a monster used a paper tag because even I don't know.""So what are we supposed to do?""We return Hou Yi's soul.""And how do you suppose we do that? We have no idea of how to do so and we have no where the box is."I looked at her knowingly and she deadpanned again."You already know where it is."I nodded. I held out an old wooden box with a weathered paper on top."So we just go to where that temple is and explore it."I nodded and we all began preparing our journey. End of part 1
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So... I don't have the will to write here on the forums. I'll just put the rest in Wattpad.
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oah. This is some quality fan fics. I may need to incorporate some of these to the next g
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QUOTE (An @ Jan 27 2017, 05:51 PM) quotecWoah. This is some quality fan fics. I may need to incorporate some of these to the next game.QuoteEndQuoteEEndWow An! Thanks for that! I was hitting a slump in my Fanfic writing because of multiple... thesis... but I'm actually using Wattpad for this story.here's a linkhttps://www.wattpad.com/story/48428261-ge-n...s-of-the-futureI'll try and update soon since you're actually reading them...I feel embarrassed since these were quite long ag
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QUOTE (AsterBlade @ Mar 9 2017, 01:18 PM) quotecWow An! Thanks for that! I was hitting a slump in my Fanfic writing because of multiple... thesis... but I'm actually using Wattpad for this story.here's a linkhttps://www.wattpad.com/story/48428261-ge-n...s-of-the-futureI'll try and update soon since you're actually reading them...I feel embarrassed since these were quite long ago...QuoteEndQuoteEEndHaha! I love reading Ge.ne.sis fanfic and try to read them whenever my limited time allow. It is amazing to see what people come up with from such a a few ideas in my head. I see in your profile that you are doing an RPG in RPG maker? How is that coming along? And hey! I'm not dead
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QUOTE (An @ Mar 19 2017, 03:23 AM) quotecHaha! I love reading Ge.ne.sis fanfic and try to read them whenever my limited time allow. It is amazing to see what people come up with from such a a few ideas in my head. I see in your profile that you are doing an RPG in RPG maker? How is that coming along? And hey! I'm not dead yet!QuoteEndQuoteEEndI tried...And failed miserably...Making a game while doing three 110 page long thesis papers really does put a number on a guy...I'll try and get back to writing on the fanfic by summer... as I play Persona 5...Besides An, you being dead has been a running joke for nearly 5 years...Making art and not responding to an overwhelming cult makes you really wonder what happened to aforementioned artis
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Hi Asher,
I tried to preserving the formatting for your fan fic during migration but couldn't. Sorry about that >_<. You may need to reformat and add paragraphs to the story.