joshyface
re you currently on your computer editing the st
blackhawkkid
o like i said i need bout an hour of good time to edit thats straight or all my ideas go out the window. i'll do it on the weekend when i have less to
joshyface
kay, then people giving you more input shouldn't be an is
blackhawkkid
mm i suppose thats true
dragoonalpha
i what I miss
raf9900
uite a bit. EL's rview on the story didn't exactly please Talon. Me and Josh spent a few posts trying to calm him down. Miscomunication ensues. Luckly, everything is fine now. But for how l
joshyface
ntil his finishes editing his story. I'm gonna make it bleed ag
raf9900
But no pressure Talon. Keep your p
blackhawkkid
ey guys x cough cough x i've been sick since thursday night. i'm not gonna be able to edit tonight cuz i cant spend a good amount of time on here. anyhow i'm hoping to edit tomorrow possibly if not i might be a wh
raf9900
*terminal patient cough*I've got the incurable cough of death by two and a half weeks now. No, seriously. kills this cough. Luckly, there's no blood (y
blackhawkkid
ou think thats bad i woke up at 10 at night and vomited 7 times that ni
joshyface
re you looking for sympa
blackhawkkid
o i dont need sympathy i need t
blackhawkkid
k i did a little editing but i cant seem to get into it i'll finish up la
joshyface
hich chapter did you begin editing? Don't make your editor w
blackhawkkid
edited them both the first one i edited per your suggestions and the second one i'm bout half way thro
joshyface
as this been edited yet? Cause I am not going to do anything until I get to go ah
blackhawkkid
inding the time i'll do it this weekend i cant do anything major without time. so just wait a wh
blackhawkkid
k so i fixed the plot hole that josh pointed out and added some.... how did josh put it..... visualization t
joshyface
said imagery not visualization. Visualization sounds weird, and plus I said imagery because it is a literary t
