blackhawkkid
/sizeoNOTsizec/sizec switched wor
joshyface
here are ways to explicitly state they are back to emi's world. The way you word it implies they are out of emi's world. Maybe if you stated a familiar setting. "It had been a week since esis (do they know who esis is? I don't believe so.) attacked and mortally wounded Reciful, and they returned to the crystal field (check name) [insert reason here].&q
blackhawkkid
ould you not have just told me something like that in the first place. if i'm not getting it the first or second time i would think that it would be easier to just tell
joshyface
o, I am here to tell you what is wrong with it. Not to write it for
blackhawkkid
ot asking you to write it i'm asking you to give an example of something that would make sense if i may not know about
dragoonalpha
.o... I'll.. Just... stand over there by that tree.... *Backs away slo
raf9900
on't worry, it scares the hell out of me too Avalon, and my flame war alarm is ticking more than ever, but they that they kinda like doing that. So better stay as far as possible and think on something else. Hopefully, some day they'll compromise. Hopefu
blackhawkkid
omehow i get the feeling we're two sides of the same coin. just on the opposite si
raf9900
Two sides of same coin? Well, it does help that we got here by the same time, that we both have a fan fic and that where you can see one of us in the forum, the other is usually not very far away. So yeah, two sides of the same coin.But still, there's gotta be another way to say that.Ooh, I got it: We are each other's foils. Yep, that's it. Much better now, right? At least, it's less awkward to say that.Btw, you're the sidekick.Okay, now back on topic! So, how is it? To handle other people's caracters? Must be a crazy pressure. One of the many reasons I didn't do what you
blackhawkkid
o be honest i'm still figuring it out. i'm working on building the story to the point they enter the story right now but it's gonna be a wh
joshyface
ave you not planned your plo
raf9900
n this paricular case, he's allowed a brak. After all, he wasn't sure of what caracters he would use until the end of september. This set of caracters generate a different story from other set, by the sheer difference their personalities m
joshyface
e should still have a basic outline of events. Or wait for the characters then decide the p
raf9900
f the second case is true, that would explain the delay. Just say
blackhawkkid
af thats the exact situation. i do have a basic plot pulled out but it's sketchy plus at this point i've been relying on free time (which i haven't had much of) to write it on top of that i have a tad bit of writers bl
raf9900
ame thing here. For some reason, I can't go further than one or two paragraphs per day. THat is, if I open the file at all. I'd like to say it's no free time, but it isn't. I'm just not focused on it anymore... Having an imaginative mind has it's downsi
