blehgah
This really took me too long to do. Thought I'd share anyway. More to come, all that fun stuff.EDIT: Slight changes. /needs crit???EDIT 2: More slight changes. Really, I'll just keep in mind that I when I draw jaws, they tend to be mascul
chamomileess
A...Man crossplaying as Nera?If that was your intention, then it's amazing:DLet me just say this: my opinions on art are totally invalid, as I can neither draw nor colour within the lines of a colouring b
blehgah
Sigh. I guess I have to draw her in like, sexytiem clothing in order to make her look like a g
chamomileess
1. She's proportioned very much like a man. Her legs, especially her thighs, make her look like some Triathlon athlete.2. The colouring on her arms and legs, while adding depth and more definition to her overall look, give her a very muscular feel.3a. Her face reminds me of Marth from Fire Emblem. Don't ask me where I see it, I just do.3b. Her face shape = My face shape. >_
EternalLurker
Granted, I'm with Chamo on crying foul at those stupid lines in those frickin' coloring books the restaurants give you when you order a kid's menu.THE LINESTHEYWON'TSTAYS
an
/tongue.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid=":P" border="0" alt="tongue.gif" />!The coloring is very good! What software did you use for coloring? The art itself is not bad; however, there are some problems with the form like other have mentioned. A couple easy fixes and it will look lot better. + Add some eyeslashes+ Give her a rounder and chin and face+ Move her chest up a little.+ Have smaller thighs.You should draw sisily and Gelyan too. If you dont mind me asking, how old are you? I remember myself started doodling when I was in the last year of high school /tongue.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid=":P" border="0" alt="tongue.gif" />Awesome art overall tho. Can't wait to see mor
EternalLurker
QUOTE (An @ Jan 5 2011, 12:54 AM) quotecIf you dont mind me asking, how old are you?QuoteEndQuoteEEndJudging by this, I'ma guess they're in high school
mokona96
She has done/tried to do Sisily, and I'm not sure about Gelyan. I doubt she'll make the thighs smaller though, she's been ranting about it for a wh
an
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blehgah
Also, Adrian: flhgjsrthynlaer. You s
mokona96
haha. Online names please. No confusing people. And it's true, you were rant
blehgah
In fact, let's aim that question to both of your poi
mokona96
m, people know who you're talking to/about. And I have no i
blehgah
But yeah, yeah, I'll remember next t
joshyface
DISCLAIMER: I DREW THIS IN ABOUT 5 MIN, AND INKED IT IN 2. IT IS VERY SLOPPY. I took some creative liberties, like the collar. Let's critique. 1/ The lines are not really defined, I blame my scanner though. 2/ The chin should be pointier, so Gely looks more masculine.3/ Hair should be longer. Overall, I think the picture is okay. I don't really draw anime, making my skills sub-par. I might add color later, but i need to wait till I get new black and white colored penc
EternalLurker
A critic is a person who gives critiques. When you say "Let's critic," you really mean to say "Let's critique."Other than that, the neck is a tad bit long but it otherwise seems pretty well-proportioned. Although the perfectly-side-on-view of the face is kinda cheating. /tongue.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid=":P" border="0" alt="tongue.gif
joshyface
QUOTE (EternalLurker @ Jan 5 2011, 09:45 PM) quotecMy critique:A critic is a person who gives critiques. When you say "Let's critic," you really mean to say "Let's critique."Other than that, the neck is a tad bit long but it otherwise seems pretty well-proportioned. Although the perfectly-side-on-view of the face is kinda cheating. /tongue.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid=":P" border="0" alt="tongue.gif" />QuoteEndQuoteEEndOh sorry, fixed the error. Yeah, I agree. Sideways heads are the easiest/cheating. To make you know I can actually draw, I'll upload this.Sorry it isn't finished. I don't like to keep my artwork for too long. Oh and this guy's eye is too
an
h. Great job Josh! Is that a chalk sketch on black canvas? Are you taking fine art clas
joshyface
es and yes. Although, how compliant I am to doing my art projects on time is, well, another topic entir
jamesting
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