paladin
plz describe anything or any one you come up
chamomileess
Anyways, for monsters, any reawakened beast of yore would be good; things like Chimera, Behemoth and whatnot.As for characters, it's all up to you. I chose to base the characters for my story off of the people on this forum, and you can do that too if you like. Or, just pull characters out of your... er... you get the point. With more than one person on this project (you did mention your friends, right?), creating characters should be an easy t
blah701
Hmmm... I see your dilemma. You don't want it to be too average, since secret organization is all too common nowadays. Demons, monsters... hmmm.....You mentioned monsters of earth? Maybe you should go with the flow. I like to have underlying philosophy in my story so that there is a rule to my chaos. However, if you think of it like this....Since it isn't my story, I'll just give you what my spin would be like. Please edit it to however you feel like it.If you haven't noticed, the human race has been using... almost abusing... Earth. The pollution and all the other things. This has gotten the planet... upset. Now, if you want this to be a scientific story, you can say that certain chemical was forged in the Earth's soil that it started to mutate into a creature all of its own... like how scientists theorize that the creation took in the first place. Or... if you want to be magical, you can say that planet itself is upset, and therefore have unleashed its guardians... almost like how body releases antibodies to extinguish antigens. So there are these... golems... of sort. They are made completely out of inorganic materials. While they are mostly unintelligent, they are capable of regenerating at extreme speeds. They are, however, not fast. Their composition can be any sort of minerals... like quartz, diamonds, magma... etc. Their goal is simple: to rid the Earth of all species.Now, the larger variants of these creatures have been few and far in between in the surface. Most are bidding their time underground, where they await for the expeditionary forces to locate a suitable location to emerge. These expeditionary forces look much like human beings... except they are made out of various carbon structure. Impossible to destroy using normal guns, they are quite solid and intelligent, although they mostly obey their orders of finding a suitable location for their larger brethren to surface. A secret underground organization... which is you guys... are formed to stop these expeditionary forces from finding a suitable location, blocking all the locations that are already chosen, and ultimately convince the governments to settle their differences and work for all creation's survival.Hmm... I think I like this plot..... well, it isn't copyrighted and I really don't care however anyone uses it. Please enjoy the plot and alter it as you see
chamomileess
QUOTE (Stragas @ Jan 2 2010, 01:33 PM) quotecIf you haven't noticed, the human race has been using... almost abusing... Earth. The pollution and all the other things. This has gotten the planet... upset. Now, if you want this to be a scientific story, you can say that certain chemical was forged in the Earth's soil that it started to mutate into a creature all of its own... like how scientists theorize that the creation took in the first place. Or... if you want to be magical, you can say that planet itself is upset, and therefore have unleashed its guardians... almost like how body releases antibodies to extinguish antigens. So there are these... golems... of sort. They are made completely out of inorganic materials. While they are mostly unintelligent, they are capable of regenerating at extreme speeds. They are, however, not fast. Their composition can be any sort of minerals... like quartz, diamonds, magma... etc. Their goal is simple: to rid the Earth of all species.QuoteEndQuoteEEndThose bolded parts are PERFECT descriptions of something that my friend at school wrote about. Calling them the Phares, these vengeful spirits of Earth have had enough with how mankind was raping the Earth, and they decided to do something about it. 327 pages of killing, blood, drama, romance and intense fight scenes later, the Phares were eventually forced back into the ground to live in squalor for all eternity. But they vowed to return, and Phares are creatures of their word.So, as you can see, coming up with this stuff is quite simple. All it takes is a little effort.(My friend got an A= on that extra credit assignment. I will explain the A= some other time
paladin
hem that the groups acronym it stands for superior hunters of evil monsters i thought i would just throw that out t
chamomileess
Two questions:1. The hunters are superior when compared to ?2. Evil monsters is kinda vague when put into context with what you're talking about... aren't they suppose to hunt all monsters, to a certain deg
blah701
I agree with Charm's questions. When you said about "hunters," it is kinda vague. I think when you said superior, you are meaning humans, no? You have to stronger than average human to be able to fight monsters... although I would disagree with that. In terms of evil monsters.... bah... I cannot help you. But let me give you a suggestion: think about why they are evil. You have to give an unconditional evidence that the monsters... or species... are evil. I would shy away from eating of human flesh, because it is like cows hating humans because they like hamburgers too much. Maybe destruction of homes? Noxious fumes? I dunno. But you have to give them the reason to be evil by choice, elsewise you will make the S.H.E.M the evil... although the story is narrated based on the SHEM, if I am not mistaken.Still, this begs a question: What kind of monsters? And how does this hunting work? Do they keep humans safe although humans don't know it? Or are they mercenaries... people hired to kill monsters? The acronym SHEM is a bit too vague to make out what you w
paladin
uman are not the only members of shem in fact their the minoraty and we're not the only ones out there we only go after the big game we are the elite and these creatures are evil only based on the fact that they ignor all the laws of their bretheren and broke the treaty they are the things that go bump in the night the one who constanly put all life in danger in their never ending quest for p
blah701
'm sorry to ask... but could you edit your post a bit? I cannot get a clear understanding of what is going on.... I can tell you are exited, tho
paladin
this young man who's a bit of a pyromainac has be playing with fire in the woods when all of a sudden a creature comes from deeper in the woods because of the light from the fire and chases him out he trip at the edge of the wood right when it ponces a silhouetted figure tackles the creature thus saving the boy this figure and the beast both disaper back into the woods the next the boy tells his best and acually only friend about what had happen and as it turns out this friend was the figure after an explaination he invites his friend to join them shortly after the boy joins shem he meets one of the evil montsers a member of death a league of the most notorius villians the ones who plot to wipe out all life sorry for any misspellingsthe pyro in the woods thing was acually inspired by my fr
blah701
gain... and I'm sorry i'm asking this..... My English is my second language and I cannot understand it as much... could you please clear it out? I cannot read anything without punctuation ma
chamomileess
Periods ( . ) are your friends. You don't need to be afraid of them, and inserting them in the proper places in your compositions will make them much more coherent.For example, I'll take your paragraph and put some periods and other grammar concepts in there:This young man who's a bit of a pyromainac has be playing with fire in the woods when all of a sudden a creature comes from deeper in the woods because of the light from the fire and chases him out. He trips at the edge of the wood right when it pounces. A silhouetted figure tackles the creature thus saving the boy. This figure and the beast both disappear back into the woods. The next the boy tells his best and actually only friend about what had happen and as it turns out this friend was the figure. After an explanation he invites his friend to join them. Shortly after the boy joins S.H.E.M. he meets one of the evil monsters: a member of Death, a league of the most notorious villains, the ones who plot to wipe out all life.I've bolded all the changes that I made. All I've done is add some punctuation and capitals, so that the post is a bit more understanda
paladin
oh well sorry i shouldn't have asked for help from those i'm not use to being around so ya'll can forget about this s
chamomileess
/happy.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid="^_^" border="0" alt="happy.gif" />I'll offer my help, and you can feel free to exploit ( I mean, use) me at any t
paladin
ah its just my fault i terible at explaining th
cin
I think you could do better just by putting periods (Like some have already suggested). Or if it helps, use / to separate different ideas. /biggrin.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid=":D" border="0" alt="biggrin.gif" /> Good luck with your fanfi
